Paragraph Analysis 2
In order to improve one's writing it is helpful for an author to analyze his or her own work. Below are my thoughts on the paragraphs of my work for project 2.
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| McPhee, Nic. "2008-01-26 (Editing a Paper) - 15" 1/26/08 via flickr. Creative Commons Attribution. |
Based on this paragraph analysis exercise I learned a number of things about my writing style. I think that one of my strengths is found in transitions and connection between topics. Going in to the final draft for this project I think these are two areas where I will not have to spend so much time. That being said, I think that I will need to focus quite a bit on developing ideas more and using less summary. I don't think I delve into enough deep analysis of the concepts and I spend to much time just going over exactly what the author said. I think this will be a main focus in my revision process going into next week.
Here is a link for the my paragraph analysis of my work.
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